Essay I (The Pedagogy of Fairy Tales) due Tuesday 3/2 at 8:30 a.m. 

Other due dates:


10. R 2/19

Write a prospectus for Essay I. A prospectus announces what the topic of your paper will be and works towards a preliminary thesis/hypothesis. The object of the prospectus is to elicit feedback from the instructor. 

11. T 2/24

Essay I: Rough Draft due--bring two hard copies to class. Note: the first draft is a substantial piece of work, representing several hours of writing--perhaps exploring a topic, or working on one approach, abandoning it, and trying another.

12. R 2/26

Essay I: Mid-process Draft due; bring two hard and/or electronic copies to class; and email it to instructor by 12:45 (as text in email, not attachment). Note: A mid-process draft is the re-working or extension of the materials of the first draft. Now your essay should really take shape in terms of content and depth. You have gone beyond description and into analysis. This draft will certainly be as long as your final draft.

13. T 3/2

Essay I: Final Draft due; Note: A final draft is the re-working or extension of the mid-process draft. You need to hand in the first draft, the mid-process draft, and all notes (including peer-editing sheets and other notes) with the final draft. Final drafts must be proofread carefully; here is where a reference guide like Hacker and your dictionary will be useful.



Instructions: Write a 3.5-5 page (875-1250 words) essay on two fairy tales. The goal of this argumentative paper is to demonstrate your fluency in original literary analysis and understanding of the features of folk and fairy tales.

Most of these essay questions are comparative, meaning that they ask you to compare two different tales. This is designed to encourage original critical thinking and to discourage plagiarism. In order to build a thesis/controlling idea, out of the similarities and differences you find, hypothesize what fairy tales teach and how they teach morals differently (or more effectively).


Please do not summarize any of the ‘plot’ (narrative, action, etc.) of the fairy tales, which are very well known to all of us. Rather, analyze the “deeper meaning” of the fairy tales, drawing attention to and citing details that a reader might miss reading them the first time; you should reread each story you write about. Each supporting paragraph should be centered on literary elements like themes, symbols, plot, and other recurring/repetitive details that expose hidden meanings; consult this Vocabulary page for more ideas. I would also encourage you to consciously adopt an approach to analyzing these fairy tales (i.e., psychological, anthropological, historical/economic, feminist, etc.). Please review the evaluative criteria.

The following are merely prompts; this means they should prompt you into formulating your own specific questions and answers which you can begin to explore in the prospectus. Choose one of the following topics:

1. Write your own essay topic. This is strongly encouraged, since students write better essays when they write about something they cherish.


2. Compare and analyze a folk tale focusing on a male protagonist to one focusing on a female one (for ex., “Judar and his Brothers” with “Cinderella” or “The Brave Little Tailor” with “The Frog Prince or Iron Heinrich”). What different kinds of rites of maturation do male and female children have to perform to become adults? How do fairy tales target the two genders differently? Why do fairy tales have such different expectations for male and female characters?


3. Compare and analyze a tale from A Thousand and One Nights to one of the Western fairy tales we have read (such as “Aladdin and the Enchanted Lamp” and “Puss in Boots”). Do these tales have similarly subversive messages regarding the attainment of wealth and happiness? How do these tales upset traditional political hierarchies while still seeming to be benign? Why do fairy tales from such different cultures stress becoming kings and leaders?  


4. Compare and analyze an older version of a fairy tale to its modern, literate form (i.e., “Story of Grandmother” to Angela Carter’s “In the Company of Wolves”; Perrault or Grimm’s “Cinderella” to Anne Sexton’s poem on p. 325, etc.). What traits of the fairy tale “hero” do modern authors revise? How do they update folk tales for modern audiences? Why do modern writers draw on such a traditional genre as the folk tale?


5. Compare and analyze Perrault and Grimm’s versions of “Cinderella” (p. 39-51) to Disney’s version (or “Aladdin and the Enchanted Lamp” to the movie Aladdin) after you have read Zipe’s article on p. 427 and reviewed the movie. Critique Disney’s sanitized version along the same lines that Zipes critiques "Puss in Boots." You must make specific reference to the ways in which the movie is shot, etc. and may not just rely on memory for this topic. With what kinds of myths does Disney attempt to brainwash American children? How do the original versions of folk tales teach more important lessons than the Disney versions? Why have American audiences accepted the banality of Disney’s versions?  

6. Compare and analyze a story from A Thousand and One Nights to one of the stories in the Folk and Fairy Tales collection. What is the function of the supernatural? How do “pagan” beliefs blend with monotheistic ones (syncretism)? Why might magic appeal to younger audiences, and how does it relate to the pedagogical function of the fairy tale?


Essay II: The Politics of Haroun and the Sea of Stories due Thursday 4/1 at 8:30 a.m.

17. T 3/23

Haroun and the Sea of Stories

Write a prospectus; library research should be accomplished

18. R 3/25

DI-277; Peer Review

Essay II: Rough Draft due

19. T 3/30

Peer Review; Self Evaluation

Essay II: Mid-Process Draft due

20. R 4/1

Peer Review

Essay II: Final Draft due

Instructions: Write a 3.5-5 page (875-1250 words) essay on Rushdie’s novel.

The purpose of the argumentative essay is for you to reflect, in writing, on the literary, social, and political importance of Salman Rushdie’s Haroun and the Sea of Stories. This essay will also allow you the opportunity to fulfill the documented essay requirement for College Writing II; that is, you must find a library resource and incorporate this research into your final essay. What type of information you research will depend on how you focus and specify your essay topic. In addition to the general evaluative criteria used for the last essay, this essay will be evaluated on your ability to find, incorporate, and cite relevant research according to the MLA method. You may use more than one source, but at least one must come from a source that is originally a print medium (though it may be located through the online databases of the library); in other words, you may use internet resources, but they will not count towards fulfillment of the assignment. Please read this Web FAQ on how to cite internet resources.

Please do not summarize any of the ‘plot’ (narrative, action, etc.) of the novel, which is very well known to all of us. Rather, analyze the “deeper meaning” of Rushdie’s book, drawing attention to and citing details that a reader might miss reading them the first time; you should reread key passages that will support your argument. Each supporting paragraph should be centered on literary elements like themes, symbols, plot, and other recurring/repetitive details that expose hidden meanings; consult this Vocabulary page for more ideas.

1. Write your own essay topic. This is strongly encouraged, since students write better essays when they write about something they cherish. The only restraints are that the essay must focus on Rushdie’s book and incorporate a library resource.

2. What political allegory does Haroun and the Sea of Stories tell through its subtext? What political practices, social freedoms, and personal liberties does Rushdie critique and advocate? Why does Rushdie couch his political critique in the language, genre, and world of fairy tales?

For your research, you might consider Rushdie’s own political history or political conflicts in the late 1980s/early 1990s (concerning Islam, Pakistan, globalism, etc.). You can specify your response by focusing on one of the following: literature, women/gender, religion, economics, or the environment. Alternatively, you may find a scholarly paper on Rushdie’s book and critique (find fault with, analyze, and counter) that author’s argument.


Essay III: Kafka’s “The Metamorphosis”

23. T 4/13

DI-277; Kafka's parables; Peer Review

Essay III: Rough Draft due

24. R 4/15

Peer-Review; Self-Evaluation

Essay III: Mid-process Draft due

25. T 4/20

Essay IV assigned

Essay III: Final Draft due


Instructions: Write a 3.5-5 page (875-1250 words) essay on Kafka's "The Metamorphosis." The goal of this argumentative paper is to demonstrate your fluency in original literary analysis. Each supporting paragraph should be centered on literary elements like themes, symbols, plot, and other recurring/repetitive details that expose hidden meanings; consult this Vocabulary page for more ideas. Please review the evaluative criteria.

The following are merely prompts; this means they should prompt you into formulating your own specific questions and answers which you can begin to explore in the prospectus. Choose one of the following topics:


1. Write your own topic (highly encouraged) on Kafka’s “The Metamorphosis.”

2. In what ways is Kafka’s “The Metamorphosis” an “anti-fairy tale”? What morals and lessons does it teach—or fail to teach? Apply a sexual, political, or anthropological approach to explain how and why Kafka inverts the traditional fairy tale. You are encouraged to make connections to fairy tales we read in the first unit of the course. You might also consider using Kafka’s other writings on parables for this topic.

3. Several critics have suggested that the monstrous vermin exists only in Gregor’s mind; that is, the metamorphosis is really subjective, a delusion. Review the evidence for this interpretation, pro and con. Is there some value in looking at the story—which is told from Gregor’s point of view—as a hallucination?

4. How does Gregor’s family undergo a metamorphosis? Is their metamorphosis perhaps more dramatic than Gregor’s?

5. What is the “unknown nourishment” Gregor actually craves (Kafka 45)? In other words, what do food and hunger allegorize in “The Metamorphosis”?


Essay IV: Ibsen's A Doll's House

27. T 4/27
Suggested: write a rough draft
28. R 4/29
Essay IV: Mid-Process Draft due;

Portfolio (revision of 1 essay and 3 responses; discussion questions [optional]) + cover letter due; Mid-process drafts may be submitted to instructor by end of class period
No class on T 5/4
Essay IV due R 5/6  11:30-12:30 in DI 324 (office) or DI 439 (Nielsen box); Note: Instructor reserves right to submit essays to Turnitin.com; Please provide evidence of draft work if you want extra credit for it.

Instructions: Write a 3.5-5 page (875-1250 words) essay on Ibsen’s A Doll’s House. The goal of this argumentative paper is to demonstrate your fluency in original literary analysis and understanding of the features of modern European drama that emerge after close interpretation.

Like most literary interpretive papers, your paper should offer textual support and clearly articulated arguments. Unlike papers treating novels, short stories, or poems, your paper should consider the techniques of theater, including gesture/stage direction, setting, and the possibilities for interpretation that emerge from performance. If you are struggling to find the significance for a thesis (a.k.a. the ‘so what?’ of any good controlling idea), consider the purpose of Naturalist and late nineteenth-century drama; what purpose does it serve, how does it critique society, and why might audiences have been shocked by it?

The following are merely prompts; this means they should prompt you into formulating your own specific questions.

Choose one of the following topics:

1. Design your own topic on A Doll's House! This is strongly encouraged, since students write better essays when they write about something they cherish.

2. Is A Doll’s House a feminist play? Clearly articulate what you mean by feminist.  You might consider the ways in which this play treats the nineteenth-century “woman question,” which queries whether or not women engaging in public life can still retain their “femininity” (and still remain loyal wives, mothers, and daughters). Alternatively, you might explore the homosocial (female-female, or male-male) relationships in two different plays; does gender equality start with gender alliances, or are groups of men and women divided to begin with (and why)?

3. What is the tragedy of the ‘modern family’ according to Ibsen? What ‘solution’ to overcoming and/or avoiding familial tragedy does A Doll's House? How are motherhood and fatherhood portrayed? Why is modern marriage in a state of crisis? Why is the modern European drama (as it originated in the nineteenth century) so preoccupied with the issue of parentage and inheritance?

4. What roles do work and economics play in Ibsen? How does work inform characters’ identities? Does work have a positive or negative effect on social progress?

5. A Doll's House is part of the Realist and Naturalist tradition. Argue what kinds of fictions Ibsen's play critiques. How and why do characters construct fictional lives and identities, and what relation do these fairy tales have to the play's ultimate tragedy?


6. What purpose does Dr. Rank serve within the plot? What new insights does he provide into Nora's character?


7. Reread the dance scene in act II. What symbolic significance does the dance hold for Nora? Explore the levels of meaning it holds.


Please note:
- You should have an original title for your essay

- These are prompts, designed to prompt you into thinking about your own writing. You should revise and specify the exact kinds of questions your essay will be addressing.

- Please avoid plot summary. Focus, instead, on specific motifs (symbols, repetitions, allegories) and narrative techniques (position of narrator, genre conventions) and clearly articulate their interpretation/meaning.

- If you are struggling to find the significance for a thesis (a.k.a. the ‘so what?’ of any good controlling idea), consider the purpose of literature; what purpose does it serve, how does it critique society, and how might it teach life lessons?

- Cite information according to MLA (author #) and include a Works Cited.

- Struggling for vocabulary? Take a look at this page about Vocabulary for Literature and Writing.


TIPS:
Dr. Wendy Nielsen     Correction Key for Essays     SAVE for future reference

agr        lack of agreement (1) verbs (2) pronouns     
apos        Apostrophe needed or misused
awk        awkward phraseology           
ف        deletion suggested                        
C        Content (thesis, argument, supporting paragraphs, conclusion); comments on right
cliché        overused or colloquial phrase           
cit        incomplete or awkward citation       
ev        evidence missing or questionable
ex        example or support needed
F        Form (grammar, diction, writing style); comments on left side
frag        incomplete idea; sentence fragment       
^        omission / missing word
// ism        lack of parallel structure (between nouns and pronouns generally)   
mod        unclear or dangling modifier                           
p        punctuation                   
pass         use of passive voice obstructs clarity           
rel        relevance of idea is questionable
ref        problem with pronoun reference       
rep        unnecessary repetition               
R-O        run-on sentence, comma splice, etc.       
sp        spelling error                   
specify        specify your meaning
T        wrong tense or mixing of tenses       
trans        transition needed or unclear connection   
vag        vague point; development of ideas lacking
wd ch        ineffective word choice           
wdy        wordy; cut down               
wo        rearrange word order for clarity or emphasis   
~        reverse word order               
ww        wrong word (i.e., affect/effect)
X        obvious mechanical error (its/it’s)
?        unclear or inaccurate               
√    good point worth developing further; please elaborate and expand
√+        very good analysis

CONTENT TOTAL ( /50):
   
ORIGINALITY:   
   
ARGUMENTATVE THESIS / CONTROLLING IDEA:   
   
INTRODUCTION PREPARES READER FOR FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS:   
   
LOGICAL STRUCTURE / LOGICAL PROGRESSION OF IDEAS:   
   
VALID SUPPORT FOR THESIS CLEARLY RELATES TO THESIS:    
   
EACH SUPPORTING PARAGRAPH IS UNITED AROUND A MAIN IDEA:   
   
CLARITY AND SOPHISTICATION OF THOUGHT / COHERENCE:   
   
CONCLUSION:

FORM TOTAL ( /50):
   
PRECISION OF WORDS:   
   
APPROPRIATE LEVEL OF SPECIFICITY:   
   
SENTENCE STYLE (CLEARLY STRUCTURED AND FOCUSED):   
   
MECHANICAL ERRORS:    

Portfolio Assignment: Literature and its Critics

Due in class, Thursday 4/29

The purpose of the portfolio is to allow students the opportunity to present a body of cumulative work that underscores their understanding of literary criticism and improved writing styles. This assignment, which is in lieu of a final exam, counts for 20% of the final grade.


I. Attach a Portfolio Cover Letter to your Portfolio

The first part of this portfolio should explore and analyze what you have learned about literary analysis. In a sense, I am asking you to “close read” the form of writing we have been producing all semester. What are its main features? What is not acceptable in this kind of writing? What does this kind of writing tell us about the people who use it? And most importantly, what does studying literature teach us? Your goal here is to show that you have acquired “membership” in a general academic community of practice and that you “know” the rules of the game. Prove your membership by carefully explaining what is expected from literary analysis, and provide an explanation of what this might tell us about the users of this genre.


The final section of this letter should build on the knowledge of literary analysis that you have displayed in the first section. Use this last portion of your cover letter to highlight why your writing this semester shows progress toward developing the idealized academic discourse you described in the first part. In other words, how does your writing this semester demonstrate that you are prepared to participate in the world of letters and reasoning that constitutes the university?

II. Items to be Submitted


III. Format


- Items may be submitted in a folder, stapled or clipped together, or in a binder. Please make sure your name is on every (beginning) page. You may collect your portfolios when you drop off your fourth essay on Thursday 5/6 in 324 Dickson.

IV. Evaluation


The portfolio assignment is in lieu of a final exam and therefore should represent a culmination of the skills and techniques you have learned this semester. Careful attention will be paid to the thoughtfulness of the cover letter and the extent to which you have revised your previous essays. The portfolio counts for 20% of your final grade.