College Writing II: Writing and Literary Study (Fall 2010)

Wendy C. Nielsen, Ph.D.

ENWR 106-07: College Writing II: Writing and Literary Study
M 1:00-02:15PM in DI 179 and W online on Blackboard and Elluminate. This is a hybrid course, meaning it is conducted both in-person and online. Please consult Blackboard for instructions regarding online meetings.
<http://english.montclair.edu>

Prof. Wendy Nielsen
Office Hours: drop in M 2:30-5:30, & by appt. in Dickson Hall 352.
Email: nielsenw@mail . . . 

Texts available at University Bookstore (all of the following are required):

Schilb, John and John Clifford. Making Arguments about Literature: A Compact Guide and Anthology. New York: Bedford/St. Martin, 2005.

Diana Hacker, A Writer’s Reference, 6th ed. (Bedford/St. Martin’s)

Other required readings are posted on Blackboard: http://blackboard.montclair.edu/

Course description: The second semester of the intensive first-year writing sequence.  Emphasis on the writing process continues as students study works of fiction, poetry, and drama in order to improve their writing and their understanding and appreciation of complex literary texts.  Required: approximately 6,000 words of formal writing, including at least one documented essay.  With ENWR 105, meets two-semester Gen Ed 2002 - Communication, Writing/Literature.  Meets the 1983 General Education Requirement (GER) - Communication, Reading.

Requirements:         Click here to get an explanation of my shorthand on Style issues, and my criteria for grading: http://chss.montclair.edu/~nielsenw/correction.html

#1:The Spirit of a Democratic Classroom: Respect, Collegiality, and Integrity

#2: Participation (incl. regular attendance, contribution to class discussion, discussion questions, peer review)--10%:
#3: Journal Portfolio--15%: Students will write at least one entry for nearly every text we read: first an informal blog entry for other students in class, and then a more formal journal entry for the instructor. For a close analysis, copy a key passage (3-5 lines) and then write a 1-2 page  close analysis and argue for its meaning and importance (250-400 words: word count begins after the quote). Creative responses made from the perspective of your avatar should likewise focus on a specific textual passage, although may fit this citation in the text elsewhere. You are encouraged to use these entries as an opportunity to learn how to track key themes, techniques, or issues in a literary text. Journals are not graded until the end of the semester. Post your responses to Blackboard when it is due, so that other students can learn from your work. If you post your journal response at the time it is due, then I will comment on your "mini essay" there. Owing to scheduling difficulties, I am afraid I am NOT able to read late journal entries, although I do expect to see them in the final Journal Portfolio. If you are unable to turn in your journal on time, I suggest you ask a fellow student to read and evaluate the work-in-progress. Always include a Works Cited of all sources cited and referenced.

The final Journal Portfolio includes a critical intro.; at least 3 journal entries; at least 1 revision of a journal (not a blog) entry that highlights your editing skills; and all of my comments on your journals throughout the semester. You are not required to attach your blogs, but you may if you wish. The cover letter should self-evaluate your blogs and journals and address the following questions: How have these writing exercises aided your thinking this semester? What are the strengths and weaknesses of your journals? What is your best journal entry, and why? What grade would you give yourself for this assignment? Consider the following guidelines in averaging your grade:
Although you are only required to revise one journal entry, if you revise others, I will reevaluate them. Immediately following the cover letter, place your mandatory revised journal, any other revised journals, and at least 3 original journals. You should also include any journals that you’re handing in late. Here’s a final list of everything you should include the following in this order: 1) Cover letter; 2) mandatory revised journal; 3) any other revised journals; 4) original journals from Blackboard with my original comments attached; 5) any late journals. Please simply staple everything together, or use a binder clip. No cover pages, please.

#4: 4 Unit Essays--60% (15% each):
Students will write 4 essays over the course of the semester, and for each essay, they must write two drafts. The specific assignment for each essay will be posted on Blackboard/Assignments. 

#5: Essay Portfolio--15%:
Revise Essays 1 - 3, and attach the original essays with my original comments on them. Use my comments on these essays for guidelines for revision. Attach a cover letter that answers the following questions. In what ways is academic writing different than other kinds of writing you do? What have you learned about your personal writing issues, and how do you plan to tackle these problems in the future? In what ways have you seen your writing improve over the semester?  Then staple or binder clip all the material together--no folders, please. 

Policies: Tentative schedule subject to change; please check your Montclair email and <http://chss.montclair.edu/~nielsenw/cw10.html> for updates
Date
Class Activities
Homework Due
W 9/8 online
See Bb for instructions: Course + stud. intro.; Plagiarism; how to read critically  Read 3-9, 41-45, 93-109
Unit I: Young Adult Literature
M 9/13 Review; Literature of your youth; student ques.; Perrault, "Little R. R. Hood;" Grimm, "Little Red Cap;" A. Carter, "The Company of Wolves"; Journal #1 submission and discussion Read 305-20; read last week's assignment if you have not already; DISC #1: Post 1 or more discussion questions about any of these texts on Blackboard/Discussion Forum/Unit I, and bring a copy to class. These questions might include ones you would pose as an instructor of the class, things you are confused about in the reading, or a mix between the two. The purpose of discussion questions is to open a dialogue between you and me; to make this a student-centered classroom; and to help students become better writers by becoming critical thinkers, or people who question what they read. Discussion questions are not evaluated,  are not mandatory, but are taken into consideration for your Participation Grade.  Please feel free to respond to other students' queries if you feel inspired to answer; I will take such responses as extra credit for your Participation Grade (and enjoy reading them, of course). 
W 9/15 online See Bb for instructions: Your writing avatar/persona;  Wiki entry: short fiction analysis; test Elluminate
Read 16-30, 33-39; Write Blog #1:  Write a close analysis of the passage you think most significant in any of the fictional texts we have read so far, either from your own perspective or in the voice of your avatar, and post to Bb; your audience is other students in class
M 9/20 Literary Elements; Your Questions; Critical Approaches; Your Journals;
Writing Essay #1: Young Adult Literature; Conference signup
Write Journal #1: Revise your blog entry for the instructor and post to Bb; read 47-58, 61-7; 77, 186-90; 931-36; DISC #2: Post 1 or more discussion questions about today's reading on Blackboard/Discussion Forum/Unit I, and bring a copy to class.
W 9/22 online Drafting
Write 1st draft of Essay 1: Young Adult Literature -- See Planing and Composing (p. 47 - 58)
M 9/27 Instructor-student conferences
Write Blog #2: Your experiences writing (the good, the bad, tips, and issues), either from your own perspective or that of your avatar; bring draft work to conference in 352 DI
W 9/29 online Peer Review of Essay 1: Young Adult Literature Write 2nd draft of Essay 1: Young Adult Literature -- See Revising (p. 61-7)
Unit II: Your Favorite Novel
M 10/4
Intro. to Unit II; Meet in Sprague Library 203--Library tutorial: find a scholarly text about your favorite novel
Final draft of Essay 1: Young Adult Literature due; bring a stapled, paginated hard copy to class and upload to SafeAssign on Blackboard9  
W 10/6 online Journal #2 submission and discussion Write Journal #2: What you like about your favorite novel in the voice of your avatar or yourself
M 10/11
Novel; Discussion of drafts; Journals;  citing scholarly articles Write 1st draft of Essay 2: Your Favorite Novel; Please bring draftwork to class of Essay #2, and bring a hard copy of Journal #2 (which should be posted to Bb as well)
W 10/13 online Peer Review Write 2nd draft of Essay 2: Your Favorite Novel, including an annotated entry on the scholarly, peer-reviewed article you found
 
Unit III: Poetry about Trauma
M 10/18 Introduction to next unit; W. Blake, "Chimney Sweeper" (10): recording1; "The Chimney Sweeper" from Songs of Experience; def. of irony Final draft of Essay 2: Your Favorite Novel due; bring a stapled, paginated hard copy to class and upload to SafeAssign on Blackboard9; Read 10-1
W 10/20 online E. Dickinson poems (360-67); For Better or Verse Read 127-32, 360-6; Write Blog #3: Write a close analysis of the passage you think most significant in Dickinson, either from your own perspective or in the voice of your avatar, and post to Bb; your audience is other students in class
M 10/25  J. Donne, "Death Be Not Proud" (367); D. Thomas "Do Not Go" (368); W. C. Williams, "The Last Words" (727)
367-69, 727-28; DISC #3: Post 1 or more discussion questions about today's reading on Blackboard/Discussion Forum/Unit III, and bring a copy to class.
W 10/27 online Review; See Bb for instructions: Women Writers:  S. Plath, "Daddy" (710)
710-13; Write Journal #3: Revise Blog #3 for the instructor in your own voice or that of your avatar
M 11/1 Discussion of drafts Write 1st draft of Essay 3: Compare Poetry about Trauma; bring at least one copy of draft to class; bring Journal #3 to class as well
W 11/3 online Peer Review Write 2nd draft of Essay 3: Compare Poetry about Trauma and post to Bb
Unit IV: Dramatic Sketch
M 11/8 Def. of drama; Strindberg; Strindberg and Helium; Save the date: Sweeney Todd
Final draft of Essay 3: Compare Poetry about Trauma due
W 11/10 online See Bb for instructions: Strindberg, "The Stronger"
Read 138-42, 156-66;Write Blog #4: Write a close analysis of the passage you think most significant in Strindberg, either from your own perspective or in the voice of your avatar, and post to Bb; your audience is other students in class
M 11/15 S. Glaspell, "Trifles"
Read 143-53; DISC #4: Post 1 or more discussion questions about the reading on Blackboard/Discussion Forum/Unit IV, and bring a copy to class.
W 11/17 online See Bb for instructions: Creative Writing ex.; Art of the Theater Review
Read at least one theater review at CurtainUp; Journal #4: Revise Blog #4 for the instructor in your own voice or that of your avatar. If you are doing a Theater Review, you need to go to Sweeney Todd Nov. 17-21.
M 11/22 Discussion of drafts and Journal Portfolio
Write 1st draft of Essay 4: Dramatic Sketch and bring two copies to classPlease also bring copies of your journals that need revising to class.
W 11/24 online Reading day
Continue drafting at home
M 11/29 Peer Review and Journal Portfolio Write 2nd draft of Essay 4: Dramatic Sketch and bring two copies to class; post a draft to Blackboard/Assignments/Unit IV/Draft as well. Please also bring copies of your journals that need revising to class, and a rough draft of your critical introduction.
W 12/1 online See Bb for instructions Final draft of Essay 4: Dramatic Sketch due; Final draft due on Blackboard/Unit IV/Assignment as a pdf, rtf, doc, or docx file ONLY, and on Blackboard/Assignments/Safe Assign; If possible, please drop off a hard copy under my office door (352 DI) as well on this day (if you are not able to come to campus this day, please bring a hard copy on M 12/6).
M 12/6 Discussion of Essay Portfolio
Journal Portfolio due; Optional: Participation Packet due (print out your Discussion Questions and responses to discussion questions, and staple). Last day that Extra Credit is accepted.
W 12/8 online See Bb for instructions Revise Essays 1 - 3 
M 12/13
Last day of class
Essay Portfolio due
M 12/20 Portfolios returned --
Pick up your Portfolios between 2-3pm, 4-5pm, or 6-7pm in 352 DI